The NightmareSnake Saga, By: NightmareSnake Options

[NightmareSnake]

This is a story inspired by The Chronicles of D.J. This is a story about me, and the life I used to have as a codehunter.

Chapter One: The Story Begins

NightmareSnake was searching for some SSBM codes one day. He came across this site that was about SSBM and had a few tricks on it. He was checking out the tricks when he got bored. He started clicking around the site and found the site's forum. When he logged in, he saw that there was nobody there. Then he saw it. A message that said "Wondering where everyone went? Click here to find out." He clicked on the link and was taken to a forum where everything was bustling and members were all over the place.

To Be Continued.

(In the next chapter, the story type will change, comparing GNF to real life, like in the Chronicles.)

[D.J]

It's nice to see that i set the standard for future literary work here

[NightmareSnake]

Chapter Two: Global Nintendo Forums

NightmareSnake awoke to see a man with silvery hair and muscles and a machine gun standing over him. "Welcome to GNF," the man said. "My name is SilverJFX." "But... how did I get here?" said NightmareSnake. SilverJFX said, "You must've gotten in through the old SSBM site. Come on, I'll show you around." Silver began leading NmS through the site. "This is the Global Lounge, where you can talk abouit just about anything you want." "Cool," said NightmareSnake. SilverJFX went on: "And this is the Smash Sanctum, where we discuss Super Smash Bros. Melee." "I love SSBM!" said NightmareSnake. Then SilverJFX stopped and said, "And this... is what we call Da Club. Only the hawtest of the hawt can get in here." "Whoa! That's pretty cool," said NmS. "I wish I could get in there." " Dont worry," said Silver. "You will soon enough."

To Be Continued

This post has been edited by NightmareSnake: Nov 13 2005, 10:24 AM

[NightmareSnake]

Chapter Three: Becoming A Member

NightmareSnake: Wow, this is all so cool, where do I sign up?

SilverJFX points to a desk over in the corner. There was already someone at the desk signing up. NightmareSnake walks over and starts talking to the new member.

NightmareSnake: Hi, I'm NightmareSnake.

New Member: Arrr, I'm Pirate. Nice to meet ya, NightmareSnake.

Pirate walks off and begins to enjoy the forum's many wonders, leaving NightmareSnake to sign up. After signing up, NiughtmareSnake goes to the Smash Sanctum to participate ijn the popular event, the SSBM Betting Game.

To Be Continued

[VenomS124]

Good so far, it's decently written, I just think your chapters could use a little length (like instead of releases 5 short chapters make em all into one... all though that'd be pretty boring, though I'm just saying) and keep your stories in the format you made your third chapter. The grammar and spelling were fine enough for me, and I think if you develope a clear story line to this that you could take it places . Keep her coming anywho.

[NightmareSnake]

Chapter Four: Pikapig

NightmareSnake, after chatting a bit in the Global Lounge, goes back to where he signed up, and walks into the room assigned to his topic. There there were five other members. A kid in a Halo suit, A guy made of paper, a guy with long hair, a guy with a gun and a jacket with the initials "SK" imprinted on the back, and what looked like a Pikachu.

NightmareSnake: OH MY GOD! TH-THAT PIKACHU LOOKS LIKE A PIG!

Halo Kid: Yeah, that's just Pikapig, watch out for him. By the way, my name's VenomS124.

Guy with Long Hair: I'm Sephiroth.

Guy with Gun: I'm Skwaldo.

Paper Guy: And I'm Paperboy.

Pikapig: *evil smile*

To Be Continued

Oooh, I hope I live!

[Starrynite]

What a nice mini-saga. It is so pleasant to read literary works that are not written for grades or for information, but rather to entertain others. This is one of the things that make it easier for people to master the english language(it may seem old, but I am on a mission to get everyone to master the english language). With a bit more storyline development, vivid descriptions, and animated chracters this may well become a mini sage of mini sagas. Kudos, encomium, and accolades to you!

[D.J]

Everything seems good so far, keep it coming

[VenomS124]

Tis all nice and dandy, good to see you're giving an introduction for the gang. Keep her coming, can't wait to see some action.

[NightmareSnake]

I have many things to do currently, so I will be updating this very rarely, but i will be updating it. SO DON'T GET CONFUSED!!!

[VenomS124]

Confused?

CONFUSED?!


AHHHHHHHHH!!!! *runs around in circles helplessly*

Meh, just kidding. Take your time if you need to. Just make sure to get an update in soon, ok ?

[D.J]

LOL, i must have been the fastest updater this board has ever seen, anyways, i'll be patient and look forward to your next installment NS

[Henne]

You were d.j.I though you had already made the story,or read it somewhere esle,who ever heard of an udate a day!

[NightmareSnake]

I'm sorry, but I'm so busy that I've no time for updates currently. But please keep this topic open so I can make updates in the future.

[D.J]

You were d.j.I though you had already made the story,or read it somewhere esle,who ever heard of an udate a day!

Nope, the story was'nt pre-planned nor was it read anywhere else, It's more down to the fact that when i start a major project such as that, i like to get it finished as quickly as possible (IV2 will be due soon as i've been working non-stop for weeks on it).

[NightmareSnake]

IT HAS BEEN OVER THREE YEARS!

But I do plan on finishing this soon.

[NightmareSnake]

Chapter 5: The Ultimate Sarcasm War

Then the strange creature known as Pikapig said something. NightmareSnake couldn't QUITE understand it, and it sounded unintelligent.


Pikapig:"Hello. You do not rock. You are a pathetic representation of what man kind can achieve. Your presence here is most unwanted. You suck, everything you've come in contact with sucks, your life sucks. please enjoy your stay!"

NightmareSnake saw this sarcasm, and decided to respond with sarcasm of his own.

NightmareSnake: If you hate me, click on the link here The link led to www.albinoblacksheep.com/flash/you.html . I do not know if this link still works, so click AT YOUR OWN RISK.

This ended up escalating into an all-out sarcasm war than spanned, oh, maybe 2 pages. But afterward, the two became friends and all was well.


To Be Continued

[NightmareSnake]

Chapter 6: Meet the Members!

After the Pikapig thing, NightmareSnake continued to explore the depths of GNF. He met 2 more members, a Pikachu dressed like Link and a guy with twin swords, long hair, and a 5-o'clock shadow.

Pikachu: I'm Pikamon! Nice to meet you!

Guy with Sword: And I'm D.J. Glad to have you here! Welcome to GNF!

NightmareSnake: Thanks! This forum ROCKS! There's so much to do!

D.J: Yeah! And while you're here, you should go see GhostKirby at the SSBM Betting Game! It's awesome!

NightmareSnake: SSBM Betting Game, huh...

TO BE CONTINUED

[Nintron]

I like how you're using script format, but you could maybe make it longer? In fact, all the stop you wrote already could be combined into one chapter.

[NightmareSnake]

Meh, I make parts of it up as I go along. It's based off my actual experiences during my time with GNF, but the environment and dialogue is made up.

Written from a "me actually being in the Internet" point of view.

[VenomS124]

Refferencing my brother and the SSBM betting game made me a little nastalgic. GK's heading off to college this year y'know.

[NightmareSnake]

Ah, is that why he hasn't been here in like a year and a half?

Tell him to stop by at least once in a while! We miss his white roundness!

[Alamaster]

Please update this! Reminds me of the good old days